Friday, 7 October 2011

First Draft Of Script

Monday

INT: Adams room

Adam gets out of bed on the left side and steps into old pizza, then heads to the bathroom

ADAM

(under his breath)

Great

INT: Louise’s room

Louise gets out of bed, putting her feet into fluffy slippers and heads to the bathroom

LOUISE

Mmm

INT: Adams kitchen

Adam is making toast and it gets burnt

INT:  Louise’s kitchen

Louise is making toast and it comes out perfectly looking Scrumptious

EXT: On the street

Tuesday

Adam is walking to Sixth Form and as he puts his oyster in his pocket and the £10 falls out

EXT: On the street

Louise is also walking down the street and finds £10, looks around and then puts it in her pocket grinning

Ellipse of time

INT: corridor in school

Louise is loudly messing about with her friends. They get bored and walk off. Adam arrives on his way walking to lesson and his teacher abruptly stops him telling in off giving him a white slip

AMBIENT SOUNDS OF CONVERSATION

TEACHER

Why are you making so much noise?

ADAM

Sir, it wasn’t me

TEACHER

Well, I don’t care, what are you doing anyway? You should be in lessons

ADAM

Sir I have –

TEACHER

Do your top button up and where’s your blazer? You know what… white slip!

Wednesday

INT: Bookstore

Louise goes to pick up a book for her English essay, goes to pay and leaves, Adam arrives to buy the same book asks the sales assistant who tells him its out of stock.

LOUISE

Humming Sounds

ADAM

Excuse me, I was wondering if you had ___________, I need if for an essay due tomorrow

SALES ASSISTANT

Let me just check, if you could follow me

ADAM

Thanks

SALES ASSISTANT

Well, as you can see, the book is now out of stock, sorry for any inconvenience, and good luck with your essay

ADAM

*sighs* & *mumbles under breath* - Yeah Thanks

Friday

Adam is on his way home, walking to the train station when he receives a call from his mum, to be home for a ‘surprise’ at 8:30, he looks at his watch and its 8:20 and runs to get a train but misses it. As Adam misses it, Louise is waiting for the train and they both get into the same carriage beginning to chat and the rest of their lives start’s here.

*Ringing Phone*

ADAM

Hello

MUM

Adam, where are you? You’re meant to be home

ADAM

I’m on my way its been a long day

MUM

We’ll make sure you’re home by 8:30, I’ve got a surprise for everyone, make sure you’re not late

*Looks at His Watch*

ADAM

But-

MUM

Bye, darling!


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